2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。

Nowadays，shopping on line has became a new fashion.We have to say it is much more convenient for people to buy things here,and some goods on line are much cheaper. But as a coin has two sides,there are some disadvantages here ,such as the goods on line are not so good as they image.People who buy some big things like computers and cellphones may find it difficult to get after service when problems arise .Another thing I want to point out is that those who do shopping on line may be lazy one day ,because they never go out to buy anything just for fun or something . To change these disadvantages ,the government should pay much attentions about on line business ,and people who always do shopping on line should get out to buy thing just for health.