2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Now in this society ,lots of goods are on excessive packaging .If you go to supermarket ,you would find that ,it is a big waste . some goods ,just simple packing is can let people to buy it ,but lots of shops pack the goods so extravagant . Lots of people would think this question ,Why ？Because the phenomenon is terrible the cost would transfer to consumer .The shops use excessive packaging to sale the goods to attract people to buy it .In china ,you buy goods as a gift in good packaging to send your friend and relevant , you would make more face . Just because of this ,the shops catch people heart,just care packaging not quality and cost . The phenomenon is not good situation as below: 1.Increase the cost to customer 2 .Big waste of material 3. Cause the goods quality is not good we suggest that as below： 1 The government should eastabish a standard on packaging 2 We should advocate environmental life 3 Do more publicity Let us do more thing to reduce this phenomenon