托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Recent years, the debate about living in a rural area or city have been discussed seriously. Actualy,more and more person takes an oppositive attitude toward living in a rural area better than living around a lot of people. indeed, i stand in the point of living in the rural area is much better than city. To begin with the environment of city, taking Beijng for example, as we all know that the air quality has become worse than before because of accelarating pace of development. Therefore, increasing people catch the respiratory diseaze. Much emphasis should put on the environment. what's more, it's reported that the life span is much shorter in city comparing with the person who lives in the rural area the whole life. Nevertheless, the food safety is also the major problem. An army of person died from the unqualified food. That is to related goverment should make effective plans to avoid the above matters. Consequently, the stress is much higher in the city due to the higher goods price and job pressures. However, the people who lives in the rural areas enjoying the rythem of country. From the above analysis, we can draw a natural conclusion that living in the rural area is much better in living the city