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I am glad to hear that you will come to TaiWan for a journey .As a host I will give you a introduction,in order to you will prepare for you journey advance. The island of TaiWan is the biggest island in China,it lie in the southeast of FuJian, in the north of east sea, The pacific is in its eastern,and it be sorrounded by southsea in its northwest. TaiWan island is abundunt with natural source, it is famous as banana, rice and tea so on. The beatiful sence make it make thousands of travelers come to TaiWan from all over the world,I hope you will have a great trip