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How to save money As a college students when we attend compus,there are two things we should have to concern.The one thing is study and another is money.Most of all students in the college have no ability to earn money by themselves.So they have to save their living expenses.They will buy some cheap things and save money as they can .Some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. But in my opinoin,It all depends. If they have a rich family, they have no need to do that ,But if they have a poor family,This the only thing they do to reduce their family's burden.
