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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；可以适当增加副词的使用。
from these data we know that people who have high educational knowledge would earn more than people with low knowledge. in our society, many parents hope their children could go to college and get a high diploma. If you have a doctor degree, you will get a job easily and earn more money. If you just have a high school diploma, it will be very hard for you to get a good job. but if you want to get a high degree, you need to take more education pay. Education pay of college is high for some people, especially for students who living in a poor economic region. In our country, the government help those students though many ways. in the modern society, knowledge is power. we need more knowledge to get a better life.
