2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

the problem of excessive packaging ,what is beauty the goods has caused wide concern in the recent years personnel's need in every respects is climbing with the level of living is improve. the high price will be goods provided it is have peak package. the numerous people oppose the action .given what has been discussed above ,i viewed the white pollution would be over package .what's more ,a great number of packaging would decline the green tree