2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

As we all known,computer comes very popular nowadays.people cannot do many things without computer.So it is important for people to use a computer.But it is a rapier for people.There are some reason for it. Firstly,computer benefit us. For example ,we can learn English ,math and so on.We also can get lots of information by computer. On the other hand ,computer have disadvantages. Many teenagers enjoy themselves playing games. In my opinion , computer is a rapier for people.