2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays,excessive packging has been part of our life.Firstly,it leads to the waste of sources in our daily life.Secondly,it make cutomers tired of packaing.All in all,it should be paid more attention to . There is no doubt that many reasons have resulted in this phenomenon.On the on hand,some people have fixed their eys on packging when choosing things.Therefore,sellingman noticed it.On the other hand,when things product,they are not so good.Consequently,they should be on excessive to improve their quality. In my opinion,we should try our best to prevent excessive packging.First of all,goverment ought to take some actions to warn sellingman.Then,we should focus more on quality instead of packing.Anyway,excessive packging will be controled in the future.