2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

This chart shows us about British family spending distribution. The spending in their food occupies about 10%. What percentage transport makes up appropriately 14%.What surprise me is that their saving is%2 when the rent is2.Then, what percentage miscellaneous takes up !.and what percentage leisure occupies 13%.in the meantime,what percentage their education accounts for only%8. There is no doubt that British people's living standard is raising with the development of society.the living needs about food ,transport and so on don't count for much in contrast to the past.And the entertainment has gradually played an important role in life.And it should be emphasize that what percentage rent takes up too much while the saving occupies too little. As far as I'm concerned,I insist that British people should spend more money in their education.what education is to country is what engine is to car.And they should reduce the pay on entertainment.Lastly but not the least,they could save more instead of renting more.