2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

Nowadays It is very convinences for people shop online but go shopping online has two sides for people one the one side go shopping online maybe save lots of time ,people online can buy it what you like ,people on shopweb can look lots of products . one the other side go shopping online Is is very dangerous for people by times ,fristly,people may be take in ,secondly,people online buy colthers and other things maybe outside ,that is mean people spend lots of money ,lastly producds online may have bad quality . in my opinon ,shopping online is not better things ,people should buy imopint