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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From this graph,we can see that the relationship of education standard,unemployment and median weekly earnings in 2011.It can be listed as follows. First of all,when it comes to the unemployment rate in 2011,although unemployment rate of the professional degree is higher than the doctor degree slightly, it is clearly that unemployment rate was increased principally as the decreasing of education level.On the other hand,the result of median weekly earnings contrary to unemployment rate.Median weekly earnings rise with the improvement of education standard.Of course,doctor degree is out of ordinary too.According to the graph,we can draw a conclusion that the more higher education level you have,the lower your rate of unemployment and you will have higher earning. Finally,as the proverb goes, knowledge is money.Nowadays,the most important is getting appreciable salary by enhancing our education standard.Only in this way can we succeed.

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