福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

The Internet is wonderful and useful.We can do some shopping without leaving our houses. We can use the Internet for looking for jobs or selling things. We can watch movies, listen to music and write e-mails on the Internet. But there are some bad things on the Internet. We can’t often play games on the Internet.