湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

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as we knows ,english becomes more and more important in ours life . first ,if you are good at english ,you can read the news of USA.Then you can know much information form the different worlds.I think you can make you become more knowledgeable .second ,you can make friend with foreign ,and you can know more thing about the different culture.How to up ours grades is very important .