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Dear Mr and Sir, December 23th,2008 Our company already received your company 3000 produces.But according to our singing of the No.35 order,our company should have 3500 produces.So the last 500 produces we did not rceceive.Please check your produce list.We are looking forward to your early reply.It is very important for us the 500 produces.Thank you very much. Your sincerely, Wang Haiyang
