题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文中词汇表达贫乏,拼写错误稍多;连词使用偏少。
Trust is a very important element when we get along with our familiy, our friend, our colleaguage and son on. "How to keep on maintaing trust "? Many people always want to know the methods. In familiy, the member of the familiy will share their ideas with each others, and solove the problem through comminuation. This way can keep on maintaining trust in familiy. Trust is also a key factor to get along with friends well.