2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中用词稍显贫乏，有一些单词拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

As you aware , if you want to make success without a strong will .It is impossible to make it So ,will power is very important factor .Nobody cannot be easy to make success. Strong will can finish anything ,if a man wants to make success without a strong will ,it is hard to make it . For example , smoker wants to quit smoking without a strong will ,it is impossible to quit smoking .And Ma yun resist to do his business ,never give up .So he made success . Students doesn't study so hard ,they are not to be a talents .