2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

The chart represent a fact that our degree more high to less unemployment，meanwhile，our salary will better. however， Three reasons may account for this phenomenon.Fistly,the social paidly develop to high require of quality employee. Techlorige innovative change to labor's instruction.no education or lower education easise were obsoleted in highly competition.secondly, highly education people will are doing more and good，undoubtedly speak thier resever better salary and office.finally，becuse original work were well done of everybody.lower education people’s value the same with a lot of people. as far as i concerned，the phenomenon is generalization.we invest to more and more and we gain more and more in the further.