2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

The chart represent a fact . Our degree more high to less unemployment，meanwhile，our salary will better. however，three reasons may account for this phenomenon.Firstly,the social rapidly develop to high require of quality employee. Techlorige innovative change to labor's instruction.no education or lower education easies were obsoleted in highly competition.Secondly, highly education people will are doing more and good，undoubtedly speak thier resever better salary and office.finally，becuse original work were well done of everybody.lower education people’s value the same with a lot of people. as far as i concerned，the phenomenon is generalization.we invest to more and more and we gain more and more on the further.