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词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
At present, a various of family of China only have one children, so all families always take care of the children. And parents do without anything of children, so that they usually depend on their parents when they run into problems. How should help children to be independent? On the one hand, Parents should let them go out for a walk and to understand the people around their. On the other hand, when children meet with difficulties, parents should encourage they think a solution through themselves take place help children. Thus can enducate children to independent ability to think. Parents and children can't allways get together live, and children get away one day when they grow up, so parents have to help children to independent.
