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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
At present, many families in China only have one children, so all families always care of the children. And parents do without anything of children, so that they for the most part depend on their parents when they run into problems. How should help children to be independent? On the one hand, Parents should let them go out for a walk and know the people around you. On the other hand, when children meet with difficulties, parents should encourage they think a solution through themselves take place help children. Thus can enducate children to independent ability to think. Parents and children can't allways get together live, and children get away one day when they grow up, so parents have to help children to independent.
