2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

At present, many families in China only have one children, so all families always care of the children. And parents do without anything of children, so that they for the most part depend on their parents when they run into problems. How should help children to be independent? On the one hand, Parents should let them go out for a walk and know the people around you. On the other hand, When the kids have problems, parents should encourage them by yourself to find a way to solve instead of helping them. Thus can enducate children to independent ability to think. Parents and children can't allways get together live, and children get away one day when they grow up, so parents have to help children to independent.