可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
At present, many families in China only have one children, so all families always care of the children. And parents do without anything of children, so that they for the most part depend on their parents when they run into problems. How should help children to be independent? On the one hand, Parents should let them go out for a walk and know the people around you. On the other hand, When the kids have problems, parents should encourage them by yourself to find a way to solve instead of helping them. To cultivate children's independent thinking. Parents and children can't allways get together live, and children get away one day when they grow up, so parents have to help children to independent.