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At present, many families in China only have one children, so all families always care of the children. And parents do without anything of children, so that they for the most part depend on their parents when they run into problems. How should help children to be independent? On the one hand, Parents should let them go out for a walk and know the people around you. On the other hand, When the kids have problems, parents should encourage them by yourself to find a way to solve instead of helping them. To cultivate children's independent thinking. Parents and children can't always live together, when the children grow up, they will be left alone, so parents have to help children to independent.