2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
The Way to Success Nowadays,people are prone to give up in something,which maybe has depress emotion.As we all recognize,it is not easy to achieve success,so you are not bound to give away that is the critical step.There are some aspects talking about the way to success. Good preparation is the key to success.As a saying goes,"The good opportunity is always remain for a man that have a good preparation."If you have a fine preparation you will have a confident when you do a task or take part in a test,which you have a half of chance to outperform others.Not only preparation,but have a fine sensitiment.You must control your temper when you have any difficult.There is a assumption that provided you lose your temper not only you don't have a good time to prepare your task,but also you will impact on other people so you should put yourself in other's shoes.Keeping a good emotion you will have a nice day. The way to success for different people have their own specific reason.As far as I am concern,doing well preparation and keeping a good emotion are two conclusive factors,which it's mainly let us go to success.