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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;请注意分段。

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"Poor student" the special identity of students, the current widespread in our country, especially in the countryside junior middle school, the phenomenon is more serious. For them the reasons for the formation of many experts and scholars have done a lot of research. But lack of bind to specific field site and lack of further empirical research and field investigation, and the reason of its formation in practice its countermeasures and some hard to achieve their purpose. Of screw stone middle school poor student "in this article, through the questionnaire survey, mainly analyze the cause of the poor student from the school and the family are: do not take the student as this, teacher's idea is not correct; single evaluation system; the weakening of family education function. On this basis puts forward some countermeasures: enrich the campus life, meet the need of the development of the students take the student as this, stimulates the student to study the intrinsic motivation; changing ideas, make a harmonious relationship between teachers and students; establish a new type of test students' academic performance comprehensive evaluation system, set up special family, strengthen the family education.

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