2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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Today, the phenomenon of Poor Student the special identity of students who can not get high masks in exams is widely spread in our country, especially in the countryside junior middle schools. What’s more, the phenomenon is more serious. Many experts and scholars have done a lot of research to find out what causes Poor Student.