题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
With the developmentof our national economy,computer is more and more important than before.Therefore,some people think it can replace us. They have two reasons,firstly,computer can do a lot of things and it is faster than mankind.Secondly,computer can do many things people can not do. As it concerned to me,it is impossible that the computer will replace us.I have some reasons for it.On the one hand,people can decide the future of computer.On the other hand,the horse is run more faster than people,but it is still a slave.So i think we do not need worry about it.