2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the rapidly develop of our national economy,computer is more and more crucial than before.Therefore,some people think it can displace us. They have two reasons,firstly,computer can do a lot of things and it is faster than mankind.Secondly,computer can do many things that people can not do. As it concerned to me,it is impossible that the computer will replace us.I have some reasons for it.On the one hand,people can decide the future of computer.On the other hand,the horse is run faster than people,but it is still a slave.Make I uppercase we do not need worry about it.