2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Packaging is existed everywhere in modern society. Every production needs to be packaged. But there are exist some productions that are excessive packaged. Here are some reason of the exist of excessive packaging. One is people like beautiful and more package. Everyone like productions with a good appearance. The other is the businessman want to earn more money from customer through package their productions. In my eyes, excessive packaging is bad to our society. It takes many source of nature and make more pollution. Customers often spend more money on the package but not the productions. Businessmen will also treat customers. Whatever, excessive packaging is bad for customers and businessmen. We need packaging but not excessive packaging.