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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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Today, the phenomenon of Poor Student the special identity of students who can not get high marks in exams is widely spread in our country, especially in the countryside junior middle schools. What’s more, the phenomenon is more serious. Many experts and scholars have done a lot of research to find out what causes that phenomenon. But lacking of the integration with the study and the real survey spots and the further empirical studies and the field investigations are deficient, the formation and its countermeasures in practice are hard to achieve. In this article the author did questionnaire survey of poor students in Middle School of LuoShi. The questionnaire survey includes the level of challenge in school work, the standard of cooperative learning willingly, the level of interaction between teachers and students, the level of education, the level of support from the facilities offer by school, the level of support family. The questionnaire survey shows that low quantity in reading and writing, little time on the study, exams can not push them finish homework, lack of extracurricular activities and low level of support from family cause Poor Student. From those reasons the author put forward some relevant solving strategies.

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