小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Good friend I have a good friend,her name is Daphney. She is a smart girl and has a pair of beautiful eyes. I really love the time when I stay with her. Because she is really funny girl, she likes laugh and would like to make you happy. I really like her.