2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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In recent years,with the improvement of living standard,commodities with excessive packing have poured into the markets and stores,such as luxurious moon cakes and traditional Chinese rice pudding.Such a prevailing phenomenon leads to so serious waste that it has aroused people's wide concern and strong criticism. Many reasonsmay account for excessive packing .To begin with ,an increasing number of companies and stores hold the idea that fancy packaging may attract potential customers and stimulate their puchasing desire,ths earning more profits.In addition ,many customers have wrong notion that the more delicate the package looks,the higher quality the commodity will be ,which encourages the evil trend of excessive packaging. In my opinion ,excessive packaging will not only waste the precious resources,but also lay heavier burden on the environment.To prevent this phenomenon from worsening,it'shigh time that we raised people's awareness of rational consumption and saving resources.