2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。

Recently,the issue of excessive packaging has been brought into public focus.Many goods are be excessively packaged,this phenomenon produces negative effects on sociaty. There are many factors leading to this problem,the following are the most critical ones. First of all,with the firce competition more and more merchants have to focus on good packaging to attract consumers.Furthermore,some merchants pay more attention to packaging than quality of goods.What's more,beautiful packaging is convenient for people regard it as a present to give friends. There is no doubt that a pretty pakaging bring a good mood to people,however,the penomemon'disadvantages shoudn't ignored an far outweight its advantage.We should take some measures to deal with the problem together,we'd better to focus on quality of goods instead excessive packaging.