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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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作者应适量增加从句的使用量;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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As the use widely of computer in our life, the relationship between human beings and computer is more and more closely.Humen use computer everytime or everywhere,such as office,home,school and so on.we do not live without computer. As we known,computers bring much convenientin our life.First of all,we can use it connect our friend or workers,which is great for us keep friendship or keep in touch with workers in time. secondly,we can use computer to find out information,so that we can receive something quickly;and it can make us keep relations with the world.further more,computer's development is the symbal of the strenght of the country.we can take advantage from it to change our life ,even the world.however,we must remember that computer is not everything,it cannot instand of humen sonetime,so we must have a correct attitute of it. In a word,computer plays an important role in our live,we can use it to change our life more and more excellent.

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