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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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As the use widely of computer in our life, the relationship between human beings and computer is more and more closely.Human use computer every-time or everywhere,such as office,home,school and so on.We do not live without a computer. As we know,computers make much convenient in our life.First of all,we can use it connect our friends or workers,which is great for us keep friendship or keep in touch with workers on time. Secondly,we can use a computer to find out information,so that we can receive something quickly;and it can make us keep the relationship with the world.Furthermore,computer's development is the symbol of the strength of the country.We can take advantage from it to develop our economy ,even change the world.However,we must remember that computer is not everything,it cannot in stand of hum-en sometime,so we must have a correct attitute of it. In a word,computer plays an important role in our life,we can use it to change our life more and more excellent.

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