2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Being a successful people is not easy, one of the most important quality of getting success is a strong will. A strong will is the guarantee of success. There are some people get success because of a strong will. For example, Zhang Haidi is a great writer in China, but she is disabled. Someone has a great goal, but that doesn't mean you could get success. You need practice a strong will. People with a strong will could achieve their great goal. So is the students. The students with a strong will could being a useful person through studying hard. If you don't study hard, you can't get success. A strong will is important for anyone who wants to success.