题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As the compentary society devolpes dramaticly, a worrying problem have sprung up that the degree of trust among individuals has decreased.For example, when we meet a man begging for money due to his handicapped leg in the street, we are considering whether he is cheating us.Plus, in the business circles ,we consumers couldn't easily believe what the merchant has guaranteed. All these problems mentioned above are due to less trust. Especially, in the corporate world exsits the prevalence of dishonesty. Influenced by these phenomena, we, invariably, become increasing the cautious about other's guarantee, even a piece of word.Thus, this trend does much harm to the commodity economy. This underlying reason for these phenomena is that current people fail to trust each other, so keeping trust counts most, beacuse the foundation of any realtionship, whether it be with a business associate, spouse,parent,client or friend, is trust. Trust is not something that can be bulit with quick fix techniques. Rather, it is something that is cultivated through consistent habits in personal interactions.