假设你是某公司销售助理王海,请给David Smith先生写一封回信,内容包括:
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫;
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运,并列举纸箱的优点;你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱,效果很好;
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Dear David Smith
文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
With time and the development of economy, now many people have different attitudes on the classics. Some people think that the classics are classics, because they have withstood the long time test, represents the wisdom of the past. Others think that the classics are already out of date, facing a new era, we should continue to innovate and find new things. In my opinion, we can't cast aside the classics. The classic can become a classic, must have its unique feature. We should slow down our pace and settled down to read the classics and feel the classics.We can feel the profound Chinese traditional culture, can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons, can bring us an invisible mental power. As our generation, we should do is to let classics become foever. Classic charm is infinite, let us feel classics, love classics and let classics become popular.
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