2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,computers are becoming more and more common in our daily life.Some people begin to think the relationships between the computer and people. Now,people use compters to communicate with friends insted of letters,and they use computers to learn,play,listen music and so on.It seems that the communications in reality are becoming smaller and smaller.