2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

Since Men make out the computer, and the internet become more and more popular. Many people like to communicate with each other through the communication tool in internet, just like Skype,MSN,QQ,Wechat and so on. They upload all the pictures to their internet zone, whatever they eat, where ever they visit. However, we didn't call our parent or our friends or talk to them face to face frequently then before, and seem there are no words we can talk on the phone as we already show our everything on the internet where they can know from. The Interent changes the way of communicating, we can get in touch with peoples immediately when needed, it can save some times in business and help us in some urgent situation. But It would be better to talk with parent/friend face to face, which can enhance the feeling with them.