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My best friend is Lin Reimei.She has a cute English name, Linda.She is from Australia and is 14 years old.She studys in the No.2 Middle School, grade 2, class 9. She is good at English, Chinese and computer.Her habits are singing, playing basketball and reading.She is kind and friendly, which makes her popular amoung her classmates