2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达多样性不足，学术词汇使用不够准确，拼写错误稍多；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

nowdays with devolpement of technology and economic,computer is more and more fashion in our life.it makes our life comfort and convienced.so computer and man's relationship are closer than other. computer can replace to do something that complicated and hard work. human will more and more comfortable because computer can help our.