小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She's smart and cute. She knows everything. She is an easygoing person who gets along well with everyone. We've been friends for like more than ten years. We both know each other very well. I remember there was one time I had some bad times, she comforted me with her patience and wisdom. I really appreciated her for doing that.