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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；能够使用一些不错的从句；请注意分段。
My views online shopping With the development of society, more and more people like shopping online,and it becomes a fashion. As far as I'm concerned, shopping online has many advantages. For example, we can buy something that we needn't go out, and we can compare a same thing in different stores but we can just stay at home. Also, if you are hungry, you can book online and you will receive your food in a short time. However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can't sure if the food is safe, maybe you'll cheat by a salesman online that he get your money but doesn't give you your good. Shopping online as a popular shopping style developing quickly, and we have no reason to stop it. What we could just is that we must be careful when we shopping online and don't trust someone who you don't know a little.
可可英语 - 划词释义
