2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will There is no strong will, and there is no success. The strong will is vital to success. The person can achieve wonderful mission who has a strong will. Concerned about our history, there are so many huge men who come ture their duty, it's common that all of them have a strong will. Such as Mao Zedong, because he had a strong will, he wanted to rescued China, so that he came ture and made people happy. Let's talk about another person-Qin Shihuang, he was a excellent man in China's history. He built Qin dynasty though it survived just 15 years. But we can't ignore him, because he built a strong dynasty and he had a strong will. It's the same idea with our study. We can't get good grades and konwledge if we don't have a strong will and don't study hard. Therefore, we must study hard and have a strong will.