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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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作者学术词汇使用上还有很大提升空间,但拼写错误稍多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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the two types of judgments are usually made quickly. personal decisions can be catatrophic if made without thinking. on the other hand, professional health care are definitely trained to make life-changing decisions every day. the wrong personal decision may lead to heartache just as the wrong professional decision could lead to death. decisions involved marriage, family and others can be heartbreaking. here, if one dose not allow time to see the situation from every side, the results might be detasvating. these decisions should not be taken lightly. to get married is a prime exmple. to take this lightly is foolish. the process of deciding takes time and prudence. these are censarios that do not have life and dath hanging in the balance. so, one should avail of herself time available. one would certainly hope that decisions made quickly are not always wrong. in fact, if that were true,many of our loved ones would not be here with us now. doctors, namely those in the emergency room, are bombarded by situations that requires immediately diagnosis and prognosis. if either was wrong, some one may pay with his life. firemen face danger in the same manner. rushing into a burning building, turning to the left and to the right, a fireman must absolutely to make right choice, or die. others depend on him, too. the involved probably know that stakes are high, any way things go. the difference between persinal and professional decisions is usually two fold. the level of training one has prior to making life decisions and the wrost possible results are both inextricably wound up together. it is, then, wise to think in advance. lastly, it is good that blanket statements not always ring true.

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