2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

With the devolpment with the technolege, computer becomeing more and more important on daily life for everyone. Computer is useful. However,some harm is apperrence. On one hand,it is efficeice and covinent to do work or study of using computer.We can easily to get the information form the Internet on computer. And computer reduce the distance between the people and people on earth.We can see erveybody all of the world and just need sit in a stool. On the other hand, when we enjoy the computer,the more and more questions is coming. For example,we can get everything we want to buy by computer, so people become lazy and have many illness of using computer. We get close on the Internet,but,we spend too much time on computer so that we can't have the conversation in the daliy life. On the morden soceity,people and computer get close is inevitable outcome,however we also need to take care the usual daily life.