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作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。
Nowadays,can we find a person who has experienced online shopping ?Definitely not .online shopping is come into fashion in most of cities due to rapidly development internet technology . online shopping is welcome by most people due to various reasons ,people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and preious time to go from one shop to another ,just click the mouse ,they can get whatever they want while stay at home .For the retailers .it can some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds.they don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees comepared with the traditional trade mode. However,they are still some defects in online shopping frist,face to face make online shopping less reliable and trust worthy .second people will lost the fun of bargain. It is underiable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible tread in modern society.It is of great that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.only in this way we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.
