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As the rapid development of the economy ,online shopping has been a fasion.More and more people decide to buy something ,becease it is convinient.People also can find something they like and compare their price among deffrent shop quikly.So we usualy can buy somethimg with a lower price .But,in true,wo can find that there are many fake thing on online. As resulte of these,we must face online shopping reasoningly.On the one hand ,we can buy something we really necessary for it is not find on physical store,on the anthoner hand ,we need to report thedishonest behavior,so onlne shopping can develop namally